Saturday, August 6, 2016

Post#2

Andrew’s Story of the Week
Post #2
The Battle Part 1
     
          “Number one, can you identify this vessel?” asked the captain. The first officer answered “It is an exTa Class 73 war vessel.” The exTa were humanoids similar to the Borg. They had supported the Ta’Bachi during the war of Alderon . “Lt. Queis Hail the exTa vessel” commanded the Captain.
                                                                       
          “There is no response sir” reported the Lt. The captain commanded him “Go to yellow alert.” The exTa thought of themselves as a highly advanced civilization, and ignored human hails. “Go to yellow alert” ordered the captain to Lt. Queis. Lt. Queis reported “They are preparing their phasoid cannons. The Capt. ordered “Raise shields to 100% power”. The vessel fired their weapons at the Victoria.
         
          Luckily the Victoria survived the attack. “What are the closest Republican vessels with weapons?” Asked the captain. “The Yeoman in sector 376.” Reported Ensign Terra. “Call for backup.” Commanded the captain.

          The Victoria battled the exTa vessel until the Yeoman arrived. Then, suddenly a whole fleet of warships arrived and fired on the two vessels! The captain told Lt. Queis “Send a mayday to all of Conseclube! This could be the next galactic war!” explained the captain.

                             To be continued!

                             The staff of the U.S.S Victoria
The captain is Cameron O’Hera.
The first officer is Riley Watson. His nickname is Number one.

                                      The Lt. section
Lt. Majara is in engineering
Lt. Daktora is in tactics
Lt. Maltson is in security
Lt. Oneja is a science officer
Lt. O’Brien is a transporter specialist
Lt. Lagona is a councilor
Lt. Queis is in tactics
Lt.  Jones is in navigation
Lt. Brinson is in engineering
Lt. Daniels is a councilor
Lt. Conley is in security
Lt. Ani is in engineering
Lt.  Duncan is in tactics
Lt.  Mc Gween is a science officer.
Lt.  Faulkner is a transporter specialist
                                      The ensign section
Ens. Klein is in security
Ens. Terra is in tactics
Ens. Jackson is in security
Ens. Jemison is in engineering
Ens. Utah is a Jr. councilor
Ens. Farrell is a transporter specialist .

Ens. Brown is a science officer.
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11 comments:

  1. jjsgemAugust 6, 2016 at 6:28 AM

    Good development, Andrew. I look forward to seeing what Ens Jackson says and does :)

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    1. BrianAugust 6, 2016 at 6:51 AM

      He will be an interesting character.
      -Andrew

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  2. clockdocAugust 6, 2016 at 8:36 AM

    I am very impressed with the story line. I look forward to development of the plot as well as the many characters. Great start, Andrew!
    -Lee

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  3. MilnerAugust 6, 2016 at 5:44 PM

    Nice work! Will this eventually become a book? I look forward to reading it.

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    1. BrianAugust 7, 2016 at 6:22 PM

      Thank You. I would like to write a book with a larger plot someday.
      -Andrew

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  4. MilnerAugust 6, 2016 at 5:44 PM

    Nice work! Will this eventually become a book? I look forward to reading it.

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  5. Madison C.August 6, 2016 at 5:55 PM

    Andrew!! this is amazing! you are so talented. keep it up!

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  6. UnknownAugust 6, 2016 at 5:56 PM

    Cool story Andrew! When Leanna was younger she started a script for "Night of the Little Kids". You can imagine what that was about. Mostly it was in her head and she just told me the story line every day when I picked her up from school. One day we can all watch "The Battle" at the theater together.

    Uncle Buddy

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    1. BrianAugust 7, 2016 at 6:25 PM

      Thank you Uncle Buddy. It would be cool to see my blog posts in a movie
      -Andrew

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